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I need feedback on this ;_____; it looks?? okay?? but I know it could be better
I know the tail is off and idk I feel like its off but idk what
any feedback please, or resources on fly cycles
this was my last attempt at fly cycle, this is a lot better than that but I feel like it could be better
I know this is still very rough
edit: i tried something at a smaller scale???? idk if this looks any more correct? sorry its rlly small
is that like, too circular? idk
edit 2: attempt 3, any better?
edit 3: WAIT I THINK I GOT IT?? I used this very helpful tutorial that was a 3d animation www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqhhNe…
4 IM TRYING?? sorry I'm also lazy lol bc I'm afraid ill put a ton of work into it just for it to turn out bad
5 nnnngg
6 ????!!?
goddamn it flash crashed and I have the gif but I can't edit the lines anymore UGHHHHHH fml
~yellow-k9
I know the tail is off and idk I feel like its off but idk what
any feedback please, or resources on fly cycles
this was my last attempt at fly cycle, this is a lot better than that but I feel like it could be better
I know this is still very rough
edit: i tried something at a smaller scale???? idk if this looks any more correct? sorry its rlly small
is that like, too circular? idk
edit 2: attempt 3, any better?
edit 3: WAIT I THINK I GOT IT?? I used this very helpful tutorial that was a 3d animation www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqhhNe…
4 IM TRYING?? sorry I'm also lazy lol bc I'm afraid ill put a ton of work into it just for it to turn out bad
5 nnnngg
6 ????!!?
goddamn it flash crashed and I have the gif but I can't edit the lines anymore UGHHHHHH fml
~yellow-k9
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI think overall it's really good, and judging by the speed it's perceived to be going the tail is realistic. One thing I would change is how stationary the legs are, try to make it look like they are running- but in air, I hope you see what I'm getting at. Birds tend to fold in their wings almost completely in the upstroke, to minimize air resistance and whatnot. I do like how it kind of surges forward on the downstrokes, it's a nice touch! I'm by no means an 'animator', so what I say isn't exactly set in stone.